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Writing with Authentic Voice

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How to captivate your readers with a spellbinding narrator so that you can show (not tell) your character’s true self.

We’ll take the guesswork out of writing with voice so that you can give your readers an instant connection to your character and their story

AND

You’ll get the chance to practice your new skills on your own manuscript in a one-hour intensive voice workshop

Why am I the person to help you?

Confession time:

Three years ago, voice was my number one stumbling block. I was getting requests from agents, but they weren’t connecting with my manuscript’s voice. I started an intense research project, reading every article I could find on voice, and I realized that there are key elements that make up a great voice. I call it the Authenticity Framework. Now I’m a Pitch Wars Mentor with a dream agent, and my manuscript is being submitted to Big Five Publishers.

So what is the Writing with Authentic Voice Two-Hour Intensive?

On the first day of this two-part workshop, we will:

1. Break voice down into concrete building blocks that you can immediately apply to your manuscript
2. Pick apart voices from different genres so that you can use these building blocks in your genre
3. Take the literary world’s best voices and change their personality so that you can find the right personality for your story

On the second day, after you’ve had one week to revise, we reconvene for another one-hour workshop where we will:

1. Workshop two sections from each participant’s manuscript so that you can practice your voice skills AND learn how to apply them to your own manuscript

PLUS:

I will give you a written critique on any 5-page section of your manuscript.

Space is very limited!

I’m only allowing a handful of people into this class so every participant gets individual attention. Once the class size limit is reached, registration will close.

Imagine if you could mesmerize your readers with an authentic voice that reveals the core of who your character is.

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A two-part workshop where we break voice down into concrete building blocks that you can immediately apply to your manuscript
The chance to workshop two sections of your manuscript so that you can make your voice consistently engaging
Work with other writers on their sections so that writing with authentic voice becomes second nature to your writing
Includes 5-page critique
If you register within 24 hours, I will critique an additional 5 pages for FREE!

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Frequently Asked Questions

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Part 1: Wednesday, May 24th at 8pm EST

Part 2: Wednesday, May 31st at 8pm EST

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No—everyone will have lifetime access to both parts of the workshop. However, if you don’t attend the second workshop, you will miss out on the chance to have your manuscript workshopped by the larger group, and to work on other people’s as well.

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“I didn’t fall in love.” “I didn’t connect the way I had hoped.” Those are some of the most common reasons that agents reject, and voice is a key part of both of them. Voice can revolutionize your writing and allow readers to connect to your characters in a way they never could before.

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Most two-part workshops are over $100, and some of them don’t even include a critique! I am committed to giving great value in every single one of my workshops, and this one is no exception.

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A two-part workshop where we break voice down into concrete building blocks that you can immediately apply to your manuscript
The chance to workshop two sections of your manuscript so that you can make your voice consistently engaging
Work with other writers on their sections so that writing with authentic voice becomes second nature to your writing
Includes 5-page critique
If you register within 24 hours of the webinar, I will critique an additional 5 pages for FREE!

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THE QUICK BUY BONUS WON’T LAST LONG!

Everyone who signs up within 24 hours of registration opening will get an extra 5 pages critiqued for FREE!

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